Night Mistress

i can't combing any of the ideas together because i already thought up the character to the story. i'm getting :?

I would use the advice but i don't know what half they are talking about. Like "show instead of tell." how on earth do you do that?

I think i am a lost cause because i start one story then leave it. and i only make matters worse when i start another one. I have 6 stories ...

I am feeling like someone who try to write good and then find out that they are bad, then has a low self-esstem.

Welcome, i hope you enjoy it.

just forget about help me. it will do me no good any ways. thank you for everyone who was trying to help me.

does anyone like her work?

i have a feeling that i will screw up the story even more. I only want this to be a short story but it looks like i have to turn ...

so any ideas on that new title?

it's interesting.

Sound like an interesting story.

Yep. that's what this thread is here for.

Elvina waded out of the river to her towel on the riverside. She wrapped the towel around her body, and then sorted out her clothing on the tree branch. She ...

I am thinking about changing the title to my story. I mean the old title is still good, but since i'm starting fresh on the story, i thought i would ...

You need to space it out a bit. that's the only problem i see.